10 Writing Mistakes That Make You Sound Stupid

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Let me ask you a simple question. Do you want to maximize your writing talent and make more money? If that’s what you’re into, my friend, then the 10 writing mistakes will help you in your writing journey. So, your content will not sound stupid or amateur.

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Should Writers Choose Style VS Grammar?

Lately, I had an interesting encounter with a writer on LinkedIn that reminded me of some important lessons.

She barely had 2 years of professional writing experience, I suppose. Despite that, she seemed confident to defend her statement that writers should choose between style and grammar.

To my surprise, I responded nicely, but she went havoc and exclaimed her writing history—that she has been writing all her life.

I thought, why would she assume I didn’t do the same thing? It is not even surprising at all as most writers have been writing their whole life, too.

The point is, how long was she writing professionally? I mean, how long did she professionalize her skills? I don’t mean to pry, but I can’t help but ask whether she has the credentials to defend her claim? That, I don’t know.

The reason for bringing that up is because I don’t want you to choose between style and grammar for obvious reasons.

  • First, I don’t want you to sound like a fool and lose your reputation right from the start.
  • Second, I don’t want you to lose your writing voice for the sake of making money as a freelancer.

Are you getting my point?

Let’s take a look at how successful writers reach the pinnacle of success. While doing so, we uncover the 10 writing mistakes and incorporate these strategies with ours.

Are you ready? Let’s begin.

10 Writing Mistakes That Make Your Content Sound Stupid

  1. Using filler words
  2. Incorrect usage of articles “a,” “an,” and “the”
  3. Lack of strong introduction hooks
  4. Lack of copywriting
  5. Lack of effective storytelling techniques
  6. Using “to be able to” instead of “to”
  7. Using “have the capacity to” instead of “can”
  8. Writing content without compelling endings
  9. Ignoring the key components in content writing
  10. Not using powerful headlines

1. Using filler words.

Filler words are known as “unnecessary words” by definition. It can be a word, phrase, or sound to mark a pause. For example, umlikeokay, right, or you know.

Grammarly provided a few words and phrases on its list we should avoid using. Although it is challenging to make this change, it helps in improving your content 100%.

What are some examples of filler words?

  1. Basically
  2. Just
  3. Very/really/highly
  4. Needless to say
  5. For what it’s worth
  6. In my humble opinion

If you want to find out more filler words you should avoid in your writing, I suggest you read IvyPanda’s comprehensive guide to filler words.

2. Incorrect use of articles

It includes the incorrect use of “a,” “an,” and “the” in a sentence. It is often one of the biggest mistakes most non-native speakers commit in writing.

For sure, English isn’t our mother tongue, and the articles we use in our first language don’t matter often. As a result, we often neglect the right usage of them in our works.

3. Lack of strong introduction hooks.

I learned this for the first time when I stumbled upon Jon Morrow’s blog 5 years ago. You can check his latest posts on his official website. 

He said that catching the attention of the reader from the beginning is beneficial. As you may know, we are trying hard to get people’s attention as long as possible. 

The best approach is to introduce the topic in a mind-boggling way. Start with an intriguing question or powerful questions. Even if you write an article for a client, incorporating strong introduction hooks in your content remains applicable.

For example, “Do you feel that?” or “Let’s be honest.” 

Does that create a different feeling versus jumping into the topic per se? Just because you’re writing boring content, it doesn’t mean it has to be truly boring. 

As you notice, it applies a bit of copywriting, which I will discuss in a second. The reason for doing this is to apply some ingredients of public speaking in our writing. Once you do, it makes exponential changes in your content and tone in its entirety.

4. Lack of copywriting

As I mentioned earlier, content writing with a bit of copywriting can spice up your storytelling strategy. Again, it doesn’t mean if you’re writing an article, it should be mundane in contrast to writing a blog post.

I attended one of Jon Morrow’s webinars years ago and learned that adding empathetic questions will tug sensations from the heart, making your content more appealing to the audience.

Photo credits to Motista’s Big Data on 500+ Brands in 40+ Industries

A Mostista’s study entitled “Emotional Connection: The Top Line” mentioned how “activating emotional connection” enables businesses to accelerate. We’re talking about companies that belong to the Fortune 100, by the way.

According to the research, emotionally-connected businesses had a 52% increase in value than their competitors. It means those that inculcate freedom, success in life, fit in, and family in their business models.

“Emotion is business currency, but we don’t manage it like a business,” says Alan Zorfas, Motista co-founder.

5. Lack of effective storytelling techniques

Have you noticed how writers on Thought Catalog or Medium wrote their pieces?

Most of them started with storytelling. Why is that so?

I have said many times in my post that storytelling isn’t limited to fiction only. The techniques apply to many aspects of content writing.

It has the same way you are telling the story. You can measure your content’s effectiveness with how clear your audience understands the problem, as well as the solutions you have for them.

10 writing mistakes that make you sound stupid
Photo credits to Thought Catalog.com

6. Using “to be able to” instead of “can”

It is what I have often observed from the Filipino speakers. My theory is, our language is heavily rooted in the Spanish language. One of the first editors who worked with me 7 years ago told me the same thing.

To avoid this, we only say “to” instead of using the prepositional phrase “to be able to,” which is unnecessary and wordy.

For example,

Original: “I will get into the entrance to be able to get inside the building.”

Revised: “I will get into the entrance to get inside the building.”

7. Using “have the capacity to” instead of “can”

I honestly made a series of mistakes like this in most of my articles in the past. As I mentioned before, it is probably because of my language—heavily rooted in the Spanish language.

Similar to the previous point, using the phrase is wordy to describe volume or capability. Rather than using “have the capacity to,” Grammarly suggests shortening it to “can.”

In that way, it makes your content concise, which is more appealing to editorial standards.

8. Writing content without compelling endings

Jon Morrow also suggested that your content should bring changes when your readers came across it somewhere on the internet, regardless of your target goals and market.

According to him, every person should ignite passion and encouragement. It should induce transformation from someone.

9. Ignoring the 3 key components in content writing

At this point, let’s go back to the basics of an essay. Why would we have to do that? It is because I noticed in a lot of articles today, some writers don’t pay attention to the:

  1. Introduction
  2. Body
  3. Conclusion

Your thought arrangement in the articles or blog posts depends on the manner your introduction, body, and conclusion flow. 

Mecyll Gaspary

If you think they aren’t beneficial in content writing, it’s a big mistake. Your thought arrangement in the articles or blog posts depends on the manner your introduction, body, and conclusion flow. 

When the flow is absent, it will mess up the point of your writing without a doubt. Take it from my 7-year professional writing experience, my friend.

Trust me. If you want to improve your writing skills, it’s best to review the basics.

10. Not using strong headlines

Your headlines are part—should be part—of your marketing strategy. In one post wherein I discussed writing epic and killer blog posts, your headlines are business signages. They should stand out from the rest of the competitors.

In case you don’t know, the Google search results display around 7 to 10 posts, excluding the ads, of course. That means you only have 7 to 10 chances to get to the top search results.

Therefore, you fight with thousands of great writers around the world to earn that space! Google only provides 7 to 10 vacant spots, and only the best articles have higher chances to get one. Do you get what I mean?

So, good headlines comprise:

  • emotional connections
  • SEO
  • “3-Part Rule”

For example, “23 Inspiring Writing Stories That Show How They Fail, Survived, and Succeeded.” 

SEO keyword: inspiring writing stories
Compelling ingredient of the headline: 23 inspiring writing stories (Your audience will assume that post is longer, has more value, and most recently because of “23.”)
Applying the 3-part rule: “how I failed, survived, and succeeded”

Conclusion – My Final Thoughts on the Top Writing Mistakes

I collected the top 10 writing mistakes last year, based on my observations among non-native speakers on YouTube and social media accounts. I wrote them on index cards for record-keeping because I know I will write about them someday.

So, there you go, my friend. These are the top writing mistakes I often observed from most writers, especially non-native speaking freelance writers. As I mentioned earlier, it’s linguistically involved from our mother tongues.

With that said, once we practice avoiding these mistakes, it will create a tremendous change in the way we write our articles and blog poststurn out more professional and acceptable, especially for native speakers.

And one more!

If you’re an ambitious non-native speaker, I know how it feels to work harder than anybody else. You are a hard worker. You are tough and a survivor. So, you don’t deserve underpayment. You demand an income right for you.

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